Beautiful piece, Mal! I really enjoyed it. Only one tiny criticism, though. A number of your words after commas don't have a space. Easy enough to fix though. Just thought you should know.
I believe, we all are alive, but the one who understands we are alive only for some "time" can make that difference. That realization hits very rarely !! Thanks Shailaja for reading :)
In just few words, you explained the wonderful experience of dreaming. You have penned it aptly that a dream can be opened and closed. It sounds interesting.
Beautiful piece, Mal! I really enjoyed it. Only one tiny criticism, though. A number of your words after commas don't have a space. Easy enough to fix though. Just thought you should know.
ReplyDeleteOh Melony, a comment from you means a lot.Thanks for reading and finding my mistakes.It truly encourage me to write more and better!!
ReplyDeleteI like the image of opening a dream like it was a book.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.Thank you Cyn :)
ReplyDeleteThe first stanza is lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like the subtlety of this. It makes me think of the expression, "Be here now."
ReplyDeleteI like the idea that you can open and close a dream--seemingly at will.
ReplyDeleteLoved the last line- the fact that we are alive and that is enough. That itself is enough. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteSo much better to go through Life with your eyes open.
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea of opening a dream (and closing). Good luck this week!
ReplyDeleteI really liked seeing a dream as something to open. Bygone memories but new ones to make
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Innerzone :)
ReplyDeleteExactly, the value of time is always the same for everyone and the one who is truly in the present can reap the benefit of it. :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, how interesting will be that :D !Something like Inception
ReplyDeleteI believe, we all are alive, but the one who understands we are alive only for some "time" can make that difference. That realization hits very rarely !! Thanks Shailaja for reading :)
ReplyDeleteOh yea...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Adren :)
ReplyDelete:)...True,always make new memories.Thanks Laissez Faire :)
ReplyDeleteIn just few words, you explained the wonderful experience of dreaming. You have penned it aptly that a dream can be opened and closed. It sounds interesting.
ReplyDeleteYea,some dreams choke you until you can put them to action in your life.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Saumya.
Its my pleasure.
ReplyDeleteVery lovely. And thank you for the follow. I look forward to seeing you around the blogs!
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